Biro and Compass

Just to add to niteowl's critique..."Sieze" should be "seize"; you're also missing a few apostrophes, check those again. It's a good idea, and I think, although it does need some ...

Well...I enjoyed the imagery in this, for example the line about "writing memories on a brown paper bag", which was one of those lines which just gives you a perfect ...

This was, overall, an interesting idea eloquently expressed; I particularly liked the first stanza. However, as has been pointed out, on line 11 the 'you' should be your; just a ...

This was...fascinating. I loved the way you manipulated the words, an interesting and unique style of writing which is a little like Pete Doherty at his best, if you'll let ...